tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8269120272474965191.post2153678047758439510..comments2023-07-02T06:52:41.569-07:00Comments on notes, tales and observations: The Room Mom. (Part Two)Rosaria Williamshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03133147851332084180noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8269120272474965191.post-79105180089145670812011-03-02T16:16:52.890-08:002011-03-02T16:16:52.890-08:00cant understand why people are so hateful. . .cant understand why people are so hateful. . .NormalToEatPBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15441013159223880977noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8269120272474965191.post-9768622947443313992011-02-22T17:33:09.971-08:002011-02-22T17:33:09.971-08:00Marion, you are a brave one! It's hard to get ...Marion, you are a brave one! It's hard to get into a long narrative, especially coming from a blogger perspective. <br /><br />So glad you are investing your time here. I'm appreciative.Rosaria Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03133147851332084180noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8269120272474965191.post-84237917144897666992011-02-22T17:32:01.781-08:002011-02-22T17:32:01.781-08:00The reader will initially sympathize with the room...The reader will initially sympathize with the room mom, love her energy, appreciate her the way the narrator is appreciating her.<br /><br />I wanted the climate of the place to permeate the narrative, the place seeping into your skin, everyone in the office too busy to see everything and take care of things, the icy sidewalks, the gossipy neighbor teacher, the machination of all the changes nobody saw coming.<br /><br />I didn't want you to like this narrator, but to understand her circumstances; and since she is older and more set in her ways, I wanted the reader to dismiss some of what she says. Why? Because old people begin to sense those feelings around them, especially when they are not being consulted on important matters. <br /><br />Did any of these goals come through?Rosaria Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03133147851332084180noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8269120272474965191.post-6516229966946739332011-02-22T06:47:33.878-08:002011-02-22T06:47:33.878-08:00Loving this story...looking forward to the next!Loving this story...looking forward to the next!Marion Williams-Bennetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13741729110133561984noreply@blogger.com