We can count up
to something we anticipate
becoming more certain
with each telling
of those angles
and bluffs
to be navigated
in the dark
and with each counting
we grow in
confidence at the
veracity of each marker.
But
counting back
to that road full of
potholes and difficult lighting
counting back
verifies the story
even if we missed many markers
even if we ended up at the other
side of the globe.
Like watching a new life
struggle to assert itself to the full light of day
to the full approval of his
elders who have thought of all that could
happen that
didn't happen
all that was feared
that didn't amount to much.
Counting back shines
new light on the moment
puts a frame on the painting
and is now ready to be displayed
and give hope to new voyagers.
"his elders who have thought of all that could happen that didn't happen all that was feared that didn't amount to much."
ReplyDeleteSo, so true.
Like Janus you look in two directions.....fine work
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it is good to look back with fresh eyes once we are further down the road and perhaps to understand life a bit...not to live in our regret or lament the roads not taken...we can def get stuck in those moments...but i think there is value in learning....
ReplyDeleteEloquent and thought-provoking, Rosaria!
ReplyDeleteVery beautifully written. These words touch me. They're quite timely for me.
ReplyDeleteYes, this is, as your writings are, so thought provoking. Thank you for your insights.
ReplyDeleteWe all need new hope however it comes. Wishing you happiness in this season and in the year to come.
ReplyDeleteYes, we need to look in both directions. Beautifully done, rosaria. Congratulations on a very well deserved POTW from Hilary!
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