Tuesday, November 5, 2013

At the edge of the day...

First, you notice the broken concrete
weighing down
the color green
hoping to blend with water
as clouds flirt with winged fishes
and hide behind their true form
catching each other briefly
for the moment that
the eye of god winks
at the sun.

8 comments:

  1. love your animated landscape!
    ALOHA from Honolulu
    Comfort Spiral
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  2. So melancholy.

    Blessings and Bear hugs!

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  3. smiles...love the god wink there in the end...we see the detrius, but then the light...and that is the hope for me...smiles.

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  4. It is rather melancholy, but then again, I think this time of year brings out feelings of melancholy.

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  5. dimmi ciĆ² che vuoi ma la foto e bellissima.
    Ciao Rosaria
    Maurizio

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  6. It might be a very short poem but this whole section left me speechless:

    as clouds flirt with winged fishes
    and hide behind their true form
    catching each other briefly
    for the moment that
    the eye of god winks
    at the sun.

    Beautiful. Many thanks.

    Greetings from London.

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  7. wow and jeez louise

    that knocked me off my socks, rosaria. "the broken concrete weighing down the color green" — this is a profoundly moving piece of work...

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  8. So lovely, Rosaria! You have such a gift!

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